No breath in first line – ignore commas.
But there is stress/elongation on the second God.
Shade off the “Look upon me”.

“Wo-rds of my complaint”

Move it along as lots of verses

Stress on “God” “cry”
Break after “daytime”.

When saying “O”, use the back of the mouth to get a Or sound, not an Owh.

In “outcast”, cast is elongated.

Hang’d not Hang-ed, but lengthened slightly.

Emphasize “thee” and “ever” but no breath between the two.

Don’t camp up the ramping and roaring lion, as too incongruous.

“I am poured out like wat-er” (extended slightly) and watch for rit in “melting wax”.

Watch for pronunciatation – not “bownes”.
v 12 pronounce as basin (like a sink)

go through but in two bits of three beats – they stand “staring and” “looking up”on me

v 19, break after succour